At school this week we had a choice of The Wahine Disaster or the Tangawaih
Me and my friend Lewie picked The Wahine one,and this is the timeline for it.
Hi Thomas, My name is Miraj in Tuffery Class at Hay Park School. I really liked your blog post about the Whine disaster, but I do have one suggestion. That suggestion is to use more descriptive words and or add a video of you telling us the timeline of events. -Miraj
Hi Tom, You know that I enjoy history and topics like the Wahine Disaster and important in New Zealand's history. In your timeline I like that you have used the accurate timing of things that happened, I would also like included in your timeline the numbers of people who died and the number of those rescued. Did you know that it happened on April 10th 1968, Nana Glenny's 9th birthday? Good job. Mum x
Hi Thomas,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Miraj in Tuffery Class at Hay Park School. I really liked your blog post about the Whine disaster, but I do have one suggestion. That suggestion is to use more descriptive words and or add a video of you telling us the timeline of events.
-Miraj
Hi Tom,
ReplyDeleteYou know that I enjoy history and topics like the Wahine Disaster and important in New Zealand's history. In your timeline I like that you have used the accurate timing of things that happened, I would also like included in your timeline the numbers of people who died and the number of those rescued. Did you know that it happened on April 10th 1968, Nana Glenny's 9th birthday? Good job.
Mum x